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Post by Thunder on Jun 16, 2011 9:42:07 GMT -8
Rizen observed the vast expanse of land before him. [1] There were so many things here: forests, rivers, a waterfall, mountains... [2] It was such an ideal place for training many different kinds of Pokemon. [3] No wonder everyone referred to it as the Training Grounds. [4]It was Voltage, his Shinx, who first told him about this place. [5] Voltage had nagged and pestered Rizen until the Pokemorph agreed to take him to the Training Grounds. [6] "I wanna be stronger!" Voltage had whined. [7] "I wanna impress Wisp!" [8] Rizen couldn't ignore his Pokemon's request, and so they were here. [9] Voltage grinned at the scenery and ran off ahead, with Rizen following after. [10](1) [Ten sentences verified.]
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Post by Thunder on Jun 16, 2011 10:11:37 GMT -8
The first thing Voltage did was run down to one of the streams and plunge in. [1] Although he was a feline, he didn't seem to mind playing in the water. [2] Rizen walked down to the stream as the Shinx cheered and laughed, splashing water everywhere, nearly getting a few drops on Rizen in the process. [3] Rizen rolled his eyes and blocked the drops with his arm. [4]
"Careful there," Rizen growled. [5] "You don't want to electrocute the water, now. [6] I don't want to see a bunch of dead fish Pokemon rising to the surface." [7] Voltage giggled and continued splashing around in the stream, not listening to Rizen's words. [8] Rizen sighed and sat by the stream, watching his Shinx play. [9] It was rather hot today, so he didn't mind letting the Shinx cool off a bit before training. [10]
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Post by Thunder on Jun 17, 2011 14:16:55 GMT -8
After allowing Voltage to splash around a bit more, Rizen stood up. [1] "Alright, are you ready to go train?" he asked. [2] "Any more time here and you'll be playing instead of training. [3] You can't win Wisp that way." [4]
"Fine, fine," Voltage sighed. [5] The Shinx leaped out of the water and shook out his fur, sending a few droplets flying onto Rizen, who simply sighed. [6] Once Voltage was dry, the two walked over to a pile of rocks nearby. [7] There were small rocks, medium rocks, big rocks, rocks of all different shapes and sizes. [8] Rizen scanned the rocks before speaking, "Ok, Voltage. [9] Let's see you move a few of these. [10] We'll start out small and get heavier as we go." [11] Voltage nodded and walked over to one of the smaller rocks. [12]
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Post by Thunder on Jun 17, 2011 14:59:45 GMT -8
"Alright," Rizen continued. [1] "Voltage, I want you to push that boulder at least two yards, got it?" [2] Voltage nodded and set his paws on the rock. [3] It wasn't too hard for the Shinx to move. [4] The feline pushed little by little, and finally he reached two yards. [5]
"I did it!" Voltage cried, his tail wagging back and forth happily. [6]
"Good," Rizen said, "but that's only the start. [7] Take that larger boulder and push it the same distance." [8] The Pokemorph gestured to a slightly bigger rock. [9] Voltage nodded and bounded over. [10] Again, the Shinx moved it two yards without too much effort. [11] "You're doing well," Rizen praised Voltage. [12]
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Post by Thunder on Jun 17, 2011 15:07:08 GMT -8
Rizen scouted the area and found another larger boulder. [1] "Ok, now move that one," he instructed Voltage. [2] Voltage mewled cheerfully and ran over to the rock. [3] The Shinx set his tiny paws on the rock and managed another two yards. [4] Rizen praised him once again and set his sights on an even larger stone. [5] "Now move that, but only one and a half yards. [6] Voltage bounded over to the new rock and started pushing. [7]This time it took a little more strength, but he still got the job done. [8] The Shinx was starting to break into a sweat, however. [9]
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Post by Thunder on Jun 17, 2011 15:12:13 GMT -8
The two worked on several more boulders. [1] Finally, Rizen found a huge rock for Voltage to push. [2] By now, the Shinx was panting hard, his limbs exhausted. [3] Rizen made him work on one final boulder, however. [4] Voltage set his paws against the stone and heaved, but the rock didn't seem to budge. [5] He tried for a few more seconds before plopping onto the ground, tired. [6]
"Phew!" Voltage exclaimed. [7] "I'm pooped." [8]
"You did well," Rizen murmured, bending down to pick up the Shinx. [9] "Go cool down in the water some more. [10] I'll find a few Berries for you to eat." [11]
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Post by Thunder on Jun 18, 2011 15:43:47 GMT -8
Rizen climbed up a small hill where he had spotted a few bushes earlier. [1] He dug through the bushes and found a few small berries. [2] He took them down to the stream and washed them in the water. [3] Then he handed them to Voltage, who gulped them down eagerly. [4] The Shinx's paws and mouth became sticky with berry juices. [5] Voltage quickly bathed in the water and washed the juice off. [6]
"Are you ready to train again?" Rizen asked. [7]
"I'm still kinda tired," Voltage admitted. [8]
"Alright, I'll let you rest just a bit longer." [9] Rizen sat by the stream and allowed Voltage to bathe some more. [10]
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